In this crit, the feedback I received on my publication was overly very good, one thing richard mentioned which was to have a 9th page which would then say about the end of communism, a fairy tale with a bad ending. So to speak.
Another thing was how the constructivist aesthetic would come across when it's a 2d illustration rather than a pop-up element instead. It's something I attempted to come across in pop-up image but I think I may need to emphasise it even further during the next one just in case.
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1: Oppressed
factory workers.
2: Mutiny
between them.
3: Up
rise against the oppressors. (moment of Revolution)
4: Victorious,
now control the country, promise of Bread, Peace and Land.
5: Start
a fresh, new order, new art.
6: Clothing/
Identity made to recognize the revolutionaries
7: Statues and posters put up to
spread the new art and message.
8: United
people, Spread the promise across the world.
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9: Stalin destroys lenin's communism, leads to the destruction of the USSR, 1980.
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9: Stalin the poison to communism leads it to it's destruction. Nothing lasts forever.
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9: Stalin the poison to communism leads it to it's destruction. Nothing lasts forever.
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