Today's crit was again a very different one to all the others, this time we got together in our groups, my group consisted of: Me, Grace, Ant, Emily and Anna. There should have been Joe, but he was absent. (Group 5). We went around the table and discussed our work and finals to decide on the one we were to submit for Secret 7". It was interesting too because everyone had chosen a different band from the 7 to do so all the work varied from one another alot.
The feedback I received for mine was that the sleeve with the band on was hard to understand/ make out. However they preferred the wine bottle and high-heel ones over the rest due to them been alot more effective. Also to straighten the lines on the shoe as it was a bit rough from drawing it with the Wacom tablet. Overall I'm happy with the decision because It made me realise they are probably the better ones out of the lot, I liked the crit as well as It felt alot more of our own shove and allowed us to explore the work naturally from conversation rather than going by a checklist given to us.
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