Your writing is honest and your thoughts are thoroughly explained why you have done what you set out to do. There is also a lot of written content justifying why you have chosen to include the images you have.
I think the quality of text is really high. You have explained all stages & personal thoughts in well written sentences, referred to images where necessary and not left anything unexplained. Posts are clear to understand & really thorough.
On the whole your textual element is well written, you know what you want to say and express it in detail. In some posts, however, they lacked the detail you have put into other posts and I found it slightly difficult to understand.
I feel everything has been explained well and in a lot of detail, especially on all the images you have collected of the internet, scanned in ect! I also really like the points you gave about the prospectus, amazing! Although the text size changes from the first bit of writing to the text between the images, i don't know if this is intentional but i think having the same size text would look better! ( sorry that has nothing to do with quality of written work )
Your writing is honest and your thoughts are thoroughly explained why you have done what you set out to do. There is also a lot of written content justifying why you have chosen to include the images you have.
ReplyDeleteI think the quality of text is really high. You have explained all stages & personal thoughts in well written sentences, referred to images where necessary and not left anything unexplained. Posts are clear to understand & really thorough.
ReplyDeleteOn the whole your textual element is well written, you know what you want to say and express it in detail. In some posts, however, they lacked the detail you have put into other posts and I found it slightly difficult to understand.
ReplyDeleteI feel everything has been explained well and in a lot of detail, especially on all the images you have collected of the internet, scanned in ect! I also really like the points you gave about the prospectus, amazing! Although the text size changes from the first bit of writing to the text between the images, i don't know if this is intentional but i think having the same size text would look better! ( sorry that has nothing to do with quality of written work )
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